It’s Not Just Words.
Back in the day, almost as
far back as when man was first learning to harness fire for his benefit, I used
to write screenplays. I started my writing career with a stage play, then
immediately switched to writing movies (yes, the play was that terrible). I
wrote movies for many years. Had some very small successes, many huge failures,
but I loved the heck out of it.
Now I write books. My
debut novel, Untold Damage, came out on
April 8th of this year. Next April will see the second Mark Mallen
novel, Critical Damage. A lot of people liked my debut novel,
and that is super-duper awesome as it took me about ten years to learn my
craft, get an agent, and then get a publishing deal. One thing that everyone
who reads the book agrees on, outside of liking Mallen (which bodes well for a
series, right?), is that the book is very visual. And that’s where we come to
the point of this post: writing with a visual style.
And just how do you do
that, you ask?
You write in all forms.
Screenplays. Plays. Even
poetry can teach you something. Screenplays are all about movement and action,
with as little dialog as possible. Plays are the opposite, they’re mostly
dialog, BUT, you also have to have a sense of where you want the actors, what
you want them to do as they’re talking. That’s great practice for setting your
scenes and writing about things as simple as a character moving from one room
to the next. Poetry can teach you how to find the right metaphors, find the
BEST possible word to draw your word picture.
You can find screenplays
all over the Internet. It’s not a hard form to get the hang of, but it’s a very
difficult form to master. Very few ever do. Obviously you can also find plays
everywhere on the ‘net. Through writing screenplays, I learned not only how to
write in a visual manner, but also how to tell a story that contains a strong
forward movement and pacing. Through writing the one stage play that I
mentioned earlier I learned SO MUCH regarding what good dialog is, and isn’t. (mostly isn’t). Through writing poetry, I
learned how to better use metaphors to make the scene in my head match the
scene I was writing.
I’m being very serious
here, if not a bit convoluted, hahaha. Bottom line: If you want to be the best,
most visual writer you can be, open yourself up to writing in different forms.
Heck, even spend some time writing Haiku. Writing a Haiku REALLY shows the
power of just the right word.
It’s this looking at
words, sentences, and the story form in entirely new ways that will take you
far.
Bay Area resident Robert K. Lewis has
been a painter, printmaker, and a produced screenwriter. He is a contributor to
Macmillan's crime fiction fansite, Criminal Element. Lewis is a member of
Mystery Writers of America, Sisters in Crime, the International Thriller
Writers, and the Crime Writers Association. Untold Damage is his first novel. Visit him online at RobertKLewis.com and at needlecity.wordpress.com.
Great advice, Robert. Dialogue can be especially hard to nail. I can see how writing a screenplay or play would really help with that.
ReplyDeleteI agree--great advice!
ReplyDeleteThanks, guys. I really feel strongly that this stuff really helps.
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